Another part of my revision plans are including more pictures of the different rooms in the house. I added a picture of the entire house from the outside at the end of the twitterive. I feel that putting it at the end is the best spot after traveling through the entire inside of the house. I also added a picture of the stairway. I feel the picture of the stairway is important as well. I still have to add a picture and talk about the kitchen which has completely changed. I would like to see if anyone in my family has a picture from the kitchen 15 years ago.
After talking with two of my classmates I have decided that I need to adjust some things on my twitterive. I realized that I do not have enough genres within the twitterive. Realistically I only have three different genres. I have a short story, song lyrics, and a six word story. I do feel that the Six Word Story I added at the end is one of the best parts. It totally sums up how I feel about the house and the situation that might happen. I would like to add a wordle to my twitterive using some words from my tweets. I even thought about the idea of adding a shape poem but I'm not totally sold on that idea yet.
Another part of my revision plans are including more pictures of the different rooms in the house. I added a picture of the entire house from the outside at the end of the twitterive. I feel that putting it at the end is the best spot after traveling through the entire inside of the house. I also added a picture of the stairway. I feel the picture of the stairway is important as well. I still have to add a picture and talk about the kitchen which has completely changed. I would like to see if anyone in my family has a picture from the kitchen 15 years ago.
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Part of the revision process for my Twitterive not only includes getting feed back from friends but to also ask myself questions. It's important to talk about these questions so that I know my story will be clear to the audience. Asking these questions makes me think more about my connection to the story. The questions also helped me to realize that I need to add a few more genres.
Who are my characters? --The characters for my story are me and a house. What is your story? --My story explains the changes that I have seen in a house over the past 15 years. The story also explains how I feel about this house going up for sale. What genres or modes are you using in your story? -- In my story I am using pictures, poems, music, micro fictions. When does your story take place? --My story takes place from 15 years ago until present day. In my pictures you see present day but my memories are from years ago. Where does your story take place? --My story takes place at my grandparents house in Pennsauken NJ. Do you feel a connection or lack of connection to this place? --I feel a very big connection to this place while also feeling a very big lack of connection because of the changes that have taken place there. |